Example 4: Word-for-Word - Correct Version

Original Source Material
Student's Version

Business plays a mammoth role in workforce development, but many environments are inhospitable to learning, and business goals may fail to serve the learner. The competitive global economy has caused employers to take a greater interest in human resource development because it is through people, not technology, that competitive edge is gained.

"Workforce development" is more closely linked to job performance than to larger educational goals. Some business environments are "inhospitable to learning" and business goals "fail to serve the learner", although "competitive edge" is gained with the human capital and not with technological advances (Bierema, 2000, p. 278).

Source:
Bierema, L. L. (2000). Moving beyond performance paradigms in human resource development. In A. L. Wilson & E. R. Hayes (Eds.), Handbook of adult and continuing education (pp. 278-293). San Francisco, CA: Jossey-Bass.
Reference:
Bierema, L. L. (2000). Moving beyond performance paradigms in human resource development. In A. L. Wilson & E. R. Hayes (Eds.), Handbook of adult and continuing education (pp. 278-293). San Francisco, CA: Jossey-Bass.

Analysis:

  • Note the citation at the end of the paragraph (APA style) -Bierema, 2000, p. 278-
  • The original expressions are quoted, and the reference is provided (APA style).

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